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Original text:
The aim of the Catalyst network is to provide a platform to all
beginner developers to come and work with us on live open source
projects; it helps them become experienced contributors as well as
skilled developers. We also provide a space to all developers who have
new, exciting ideas in mind that may open possibilities of discussion
in society. As an organisation full of skilled developers we can work
with you to help make your ideas reality.
Corrected Grammer:
The aim of the Catalyst network is to provide a platform for all
beginner developers to come and work with us on live open-source
projects; it helps them become experienced contributors as well as
skilled developers. We also provide a space for all developers who
have new, exciting ideas in mind that may open possibilities of
discussion in society. As an organisation full of skilled developers
we can work with you to help make your ideas reality.
An alternate way to write it:
With the aim of increasing the awareness about Open Source and
encouraging young developers to contribute to these projects, we, at
The Catalyst” provide a platform for young developers to contribute
and collaborate on open source projects and gain insights to turn into
experienced coders.
The Catalyst is an open space where aspiring developers can come
forward with their exciting ideas- to change the world for better- and
receive guidance and resources to turn that idea into a reality.
Original text:
We are an organization of people from all over the world. We want to
see progress and improvements of people's lives in Asia and
everywhere. We are developers, designers, event organizers and
contributors who want to learn and share ideas, create and make
digital software tools and hardware, that benefit people around the
world.
Corrected Grammar:
We are an organization of people from all over the world. We want to
see progress and improvements in people's lives in Asia and
everywhere. We are developers, designers, event organizers, and
contributors who want to learn and share ideas, create and make
digital software tools and hardware, that benefit people around the
world.
Alternate Text:
An organization of young tech enthusiasts from all over India, our
team at The Catalyst comprises of talented and hardworking individuals
who strive to improve the lives of people around them and cause
positive change in the society. Our team consists of developers,
designers, event organizers and bloggers who have come together to
create digital tools and related hardware to benefit people around the
world
Original text:
We bring amazing people together to create, develop, design and make
things with Open Technologies - hardware and software - and share our
work for the benefit of all.
Corrected Grammar:
We bring amazing people together to create, develop, design, and make
things with Open Technologies - hardware and software - and share our
work for the benefit of all.
Alternate Text:
We provide a platform for talented individuals to come together to
develop and design technologies (Open Tech including hardware and
software) and share their work for the benefit of society.
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