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A visual bug : the scratches on the shirt of Pepper are not all consistent.
This type of details can 'kick out' of the story mind with a focus on details.

The problematic shot are listed here:

Carrot looks angry on this panel.
He should just look like in a struggle.

Broomstick in the last panel looks too much like the usual broomstick of Pepper. It's a bit confusing.
It must be visible she took/bought a new broom in the land of the setting moons.
Reference for colored broom with a 'folk' style :
https://hrmajesty.files.wordpress.com/2013/09/brooms_sml21.jpg

Hey,

I just received this comment on the blog, but I'm not expert to solve it:

link: http://www.peppercarrot.com/en/article377/episode-17-a-fresh-start#c0377-361

I think it's about this panel 👍

Can you have a look at it @hapit ? thanks!

With the feedback of @agryson ( thanks!) I decided to expand the adventure of Pepper on Page5 into two pages to add fluidity to the storytelling ( ellipsis is too strong ) . This change will break the translations if they are done now.

Safe pages : P1, P2 , P3 , P4

Not safe : P5 ( panels on actual P5 will be split accross two pages ; future P5 and P6 ) and P6 ( will be future P7 ), P7 ( credit will be future P8).

ETA : It will be fixed for Friday 17 June.