In response to call for TWG review, here are my comments:
Across all sections, make use of Web or web capitalization consistent.
In the Abstract, should we remove this language since we don't expect annual updates? "This specification should be updated at least annually to keep pace with the evolving Web platform."
"It is not a W3C Standard nor is it on the W3C Standards Track." This seems to conflict with the Abstract, which says, "The goal of this Web Media API Community Group specification is to transition to the W3C Recommendation Track for standards development."
1.1. "The examples in this document provides" should be "provide" with no 's' ; "to maximize the provide hints " should be "to provide hints"?
Glossary
- "MPEG-Dash" should be "MPEG-DASH"
- In Outstream Advertisement, "Eamples" should be "Examples"
- Seems there should be a definition for "linear," or explain it in the Live Streaming entry.
- Should (.m4s) be (.m4v)?
2.1.3 "Media Source Extensions [[media-source] " remove extra "[" ; In #6, I think "bitrate rendition" would be more accurate than bitrate stream
2.2.1 Would be helpful to expand on what "the encoder is able to prioritize density over quality via configuration" means
2.2.3 Please expand on or remove "(more detail)"
2.4.4 "can occur both in Live and VoD playback session" should be "sessions"
2.5 "For more efficient loading, images are often merged into larger grids" would add "(sometimes called sprites)"
3.1.1 make "navigator.userAgent" and "if(tizenGetUser){ then do X ]" monospaced font; make MPEG-Dash MPEG-DASH.
3.2 Insert a space between EMEAPI; In #3, make "encrypted" monospaced; make navigator.requestMediaKeySystemAccess() , MediaKeySystemAccess.createMediaKeys() , HTMLMediaElement.setMediaKeys(mediaKeys) monospaced; add a period after final "here" link
3.3.2 remove extra [ ] characters around links
4.6 make http urls into links
5.2 "web OS" should be "webOS"; "built with the web. And run" should be " built with the web and run"; Eco system should be ecosystem; android should be Android
5.3 capitalize windows
5.3.1 capitalize popular, make "cross walk" Crosswalk Project